Monday, 31 January 2022

New Step by Step Outline - Development from Test shoot

Here is a development of the outline of our opening sequence. We have changed some of the order of shots, however the overall mood and narrative has stayed similar. 




Developing off our test shoots will help us create our story boards. 


 
  • girl crying close up 
  • club - bodies in background, not vocal point
  • girl - hands shaking 
  • club -bodies in background, not vocal point (ring) 
  • dress ripped / blood  
  • club - bodies in background, not vocal point
  • her - crying again
  • main characters back 
  • His hands holding hammers / rings 
  • crawling body - above shot 
  • Main character - behind - crack neck 
  • close up of blood dripping from hammer 
  • close up of floor, blood dripping
  • walks over (different angles) 
  • long shot of him hitting body 
  • cut before he hit body to girl screaming 
  • Pan to man looking at girl , standing over body with hammers (he drops them) 
  • walks out casually 

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Final Sequence

 Here is my final opening sequence.